Question

书面表达（满分25）
作为高三学生，你经历过多次考试，体验过成功，也遭遇过失败。请你根据下面的提示内容，简要概述中学生中普遍存在的对考试失败的两种态度，并结合自身实际，说明你的观点。

态度一	态度二	你的态度
当考试结果不如人意时，情绪低落，丧失信心，不再继续努力	当考试失败时，分析并找出失败的原因，鼓励自己，增强自信，避免再犯同样的错误。	失败乃成功之母……

要求：
1．词数：120左右；
2．可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
As middle school students, we have all taken examinations of different types and  
         

Answer 1

As middle school students, we have all taken examinations of different types and experienced success as well as failure．Different students have different attitudes towards failure in the exams．
Some of us become low in spirits in face of failure, while others are so disappointed that they don’t want to make further efforts in their studies．As a result, their studies go from bad to worse as time goes on．
Fortunately, some students take quite positive attitudes towards their setbacks．They spare no efforts in analyzing the cause of their failure and at the same time encourage themselves to become more confident so that they won’t repeat the mistakes in their later examinations．
As far as I’m concerned, I believe that failure is the mother of success．So long as we can find out the cause of our failure and step up our efforts to improve our ways of learning, we can surely make great progress and turn our dream into reality．

首先审好题，英语作文关键在于读懂题及利用好题目所提供的线索和细节，本篇要求学生能根据提示用120字简要概述中学生中普遍存在的对考试失败的两种态度及说说自己的看法。作为学生先要把开头读懂，应以为:作为中学生我们所有人已经考过不同类型的考试，要接着说在考试中经历过成功和失败，成功和失败本身是2种不同的体验，为了让句子更协调，只能第一个词用and 第二个用as well as，对于学生考试只能是exams，而不同的学生对于考试的态度不同，考后的结果也就不同，对于失败的态度也就不同。Different students have different attitudes towards failure in the exams．有了失败，学生都有不同的反应，接下来详细描述就好了。结合提示，态度一当考试结果不如人意时（failure，disappointed），情绪低落（become low in spirits），丧失信心（lose one’s heart），不再继续努力(don’t want to make further efforts),这些反应只代表了部分同学，所以只能用some,我们中的一些Some of us，连句子就变成Some of us become low in spirits in face of failue ，面对face,是对自己失望以至于不努力，while others are so disappointed that they don’t want to make further efforts in their studies。不努力，随着时间的流逝，由不好变得更糟。As a result, their studies go from bad to worse as time goes on．结合提示态度二中，由于采取了积极的态度（take quite positive attitudes）分析并找出失败的原因（analyz the cause of their failure），鼓励自己（encourage themselves），增强自信（become more confident），避免再犯同样的错误（won’t repeat the mistakes in their later examinations）用过渡词将2种态度分开Fortunately．效果就不一样。至于我相信失败是成功之母，要翻译出来并加以说明。I believe that failure is the mother of success。原因是只要找准失败的原因加以改进，学习就能有所提高我们才能实现自己的梦想。So long as we can find out the cause of our failure and step up our efforts to improve our ways of learning, we can surely make great progress and turn our dream into reality．只要So long as，找出find out，改变学习的方法improve our ways of learning，取得极大地进步make great progress，把梦想变为现实turn our dream into reality，最后就是把句子顺序调整好，然后通读全文，不妥当的地方再稍加调整。