Question

【题目】假设你是李平，你的英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。请根据下列要求写封回信。

要点：

1.参加中文学习班； 2.看中文书刊、电视；

3.学唱中文歌曲； 4.交中国朋友。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.开头语和结尾已为你写好。

Dear Peter,

I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.

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Best wishes.

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Peter,

I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well. Here are a few suggestions.

First, it is important to take a Chinese course, as you’ll be able to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students. Secondly, it is a good idea if you can watch TV and read books, newspapers and magazines in Chinese whenever possible. Besides, singing Chinese songs can help you learn and remember Chinese words more easily. Finally, You can also make more Chinese friends. They will tell you a lot about China and help you do better in Chinese.

Try and write me in Chinese next time.

Best wishes.

Li Hua

【解析】高考中提纲式作文非常常见。写提纲式作文要注意：

　1、审题。所谓审题就是要看清题意，确定文章的中心思想、主题，并围绕中心思想组织材料。

　2、进行构思，列出简单的提纲，打造文章之骨架。文章布局要做好几件事：安排好层次段落，铺设好过渡，处理好开头和结尾。

3、扩展成文 。扩展的内容一定要紧扣主题。扩展成文时还需注意以下方面问题：

确保提纲中段落结构的思路与各段主题句的一致性。要灵活运用各种句式，如倒装句、强调句、省略句、主从复合句、对比句、分词短语、介词短语等，从而增加文章的可读性。注意使用高级框架结构的句子，让文章的结构错落有致。还要用好连接词，注意段落间、句子间的连贯性，前后表达浑然一体。

本文的主题是“如何才能学好中文”。主要内容包括1.参加中文学习班；2.看中文书刊、电视；3.学唱中文歌曲； 4.交中国朋友。

亮点：本文内容完整，涵盖全部要求，结构合理，层次清晰，运用了多种句式、连词，表达到位。

第一段点明写信的目的并提出自己的建议。第二段中把文章的主要内容即四个建议用序数连词（first...secondly...besides...finally...）连贯起来，让文章浑然一气呵成。

在第二段中在表述建议时运用了多种句式。 建议（1）是由as引导状语从句：it is important to take a Chinese course, as you’ll be able to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students. 建议（2）是由if引导的的条件状语从句：it is a good idea if you can watch TV and read books, newspapers and magazines in Chinese whenever possible.建设93）是用非谓语中的动词ing形式作主语的句子：singing Chinese songs can help you learn and remember Chinese words more easily. 最后用一个祈使句：Try and write me in Chinese next time，完美地结束本文。