Question

教育部倡导学生：每天锻炼一小时；健康工作五十年；幸福生活一辈子
请你根据以上提示，用英语准备一份发言稿，向同学们讲述一下阳光体育活动的有关情况，并就高中学生是否需要每天花一小时锻炼，谈谈你的看法及理由。
注意：1．发言稿应包括以上所有信息，要有适当发挥。
2．词数：120左右。
3．参考词汇：阳光体育活动a national student sports program；教育部the Ministry of Education
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Answer 1

Good afternoon, everyone,
Hundreds of millions of students from primary, middle schools and universities all over China joined in a national student sports program. Eleven million students in Shandong took an active part in this program.
The ministry of Education calls on students to exercise for an hour every day, in the hope that they will have good health to work fifty years and enjoy the whole life.
Personally, I think it a good idea for us senior students to have daily exercise. Although we take an hour a day for exercise, it is well worth it. Taking exercise helps us build up our body and keep a clear mind. Therefore we can work more efficiently.
Thank you!

解析试题分析：这是一篇半开放性作文，讨论的话题是健康锻炼对身体的作用。可以叙述学校的体育训练的情况。主要是在自己的个人看法中加以发挥，当然是认为体育锻炼很重要，可以锻炼我们的身心，提高健康的水平。要求考生在保证内容要点全部概括的基础上可以充分发挥自己的想象，进而用自己的语言来表达某种观点或看法，增添了写作的灵活性，同时能较好地考查考生的想象能力和英语语言表达能力。
【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如join in，take an active part in，call on，build up one’s body；并注意了句子的衔接如： therefore，although，Personally 等等。in the hope that they will have good health to work fifty years and enjoy the whole life.运用同位语从句。Taking exercise helps us build up our body and keep a clear mind.运用动名词短语作主语。
考点：半开放性作文