Question

8．以下饼图是关于高三学生填报高考志愿不同依据的人数比例．请简要描述该图，然后选择其中你填报志愿的依据，并简述理由

注意：1．词数：100左右．短文的开关和结尾已为你写好（不计入总词数）．2．可以适当增加细节，使内容连贯．
Chinese senior middle school graduates have different opinions on how to choose their courses and universities．
         We can see from the graph that                                                  
                                                                               
         So I strongly believe that with my own interest and effort，I will achieve great success in the coming university life．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
句型一：
Surprisingly （1），a large number of students，accounting for （2）as much as 20 percent，would rather （3）depend on their parents or teacher．令人惊讶的是，很多学生（多达20%的比例）宁愿依赖父母和老师．
（1）surprisingly 令人惊讶的是；这类表示情感色彩的副词常常可以放在句首，表达特定的感情色彩，用在书面表达中可以使得表达更生动．
（2）account for占据比例，本句中用动词-ing形式作非限制性定语；
（3）would rather do宁愿做…．
句型二：
it's widely acknowledged that（1）interest is the best teacher，with which （2）my university life will surely be more enjoyable and easier．人们普遍认为兴趣是最好的老师，有了它我的大学生活肯定会更有趣更轻松．
（1）It is widely acknowledged that…人们普遍认为…
（2）with which引导了非限制性定语从句，修饰了先行词interest，表示"具有了兴趣"．

解答 Chinese senior middle school graduates have different opinions on how to choose their courses and universities．
   We can see from the graph that about 35 percent of the students would base their choice on their own interest．Around 45 percent，however，insist that main consideration should be given to the needs of society．Surprisingly，a large number of students，accounting for as much as 20 percent，would rather depend on their parents or teacher【高分句型一】（图片描述）．Personally，I prefer to rely on my own interest for the following reasons（我选择的依据）：
   First，it's widely acknowledged that interest is the best teacher，with which my university life will surely be more enjoyable and easier【高分句型二】．What's more，interest helps to arouse my curiosity，stimulating my motivation for exploring（选择的理由）．
   So I strongly believe that with my own interest and effort，I will achieve great success in the coming university life．

点评 看图作文首先正确理解提示和要求，利用文字提示去正确地理解图意，得到要点．其次，确定体裁格式、人称和时态．第三，列出要点，做到要点无遗漏．第四，依据内容要点，选择确立可供自己使用的熟悉词汇、短语和句型，所以平时要关注高分词汇和句型的积累．