Question

16．请你根据如图，结合实际，以Let's listen to minor's voice为题写一篇英语短文，分析产生该社会现象的原因和后果，并发表你的看法，提出你的建议．

注意：1．仔细品味画面内容，要适当发挥想象，不要作简单描述．
2．词数150左右．开头已经写好，不计入总词数．
3．作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名．
4．提示词汇：minor 未成年人；ideological morality思想道德．
Let's listen to minor's voice
The construction of minors'ideological morality is gradually becoming the hot issue of society．
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Answer 1

分析 本文为议论文．
写作主题为：Let's listen to minor's voice（听听孩子的心声）
写作要点为：1，描述图画内容：祖国的"栋梁"在成长阶段就被书包压垮；2，分析原因；3，建议．

解答 Let's listen to minor's voice
The construction of minors'ideological morality is gradually becoming the hot issue of society． More commonly，minors have their own thoughts and their own understanding of surroundings sometimes extremely different from or even contrary to our adults'，frequently making us lose temper．
Minors have unbearable burdens on their shoulders．Besides heavy burden of different subjects，they have to attend different training courses at weekends to live up to parents'high expectations．Most often，society as well as parents and teachers value their achievements merely by their subject performances．Therefore，the construction of minors'ideological morality is ignored，thus causing lots of social and mental problems endangering the future of our nation．
Why not listen to minors'voice？Let's spare some time and chat with them in a relaxing atmosphere so that we can know their opinions and think what they think．Never force them to do what they are not willing to so that they can enjoy more free time and space．After all，they are humans．It's not human nature to make them always obey without question．

点评 考生需根据图画信息，揭示图画中的道理，根据所提供信息提炼文章的写作主题，需了解写作要点及写作意图，仔细构思写作结构，平时注意积累词汇及语法知识．