Question

【题目】现如今，网络已成为日常生活中必不可少的工具，它给我们带来很大便利的同时，也有很多弊端。下面请你谈一下自己的看法。内容包括以下要点：

1. 电脑不能代替老师上课。

2. 不在网上学习可以增强合作的能力。

3. 长时间看电脑的危害。

注意：1.词数：100词左右

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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Answer 1

【答案】Nowadays the Internet has become part of our daily life. Some students even think that computers can give us lessons instead of teachers. I don’t agree with this opinion. In my view, we can’t have lessons without teachers teaching us face to face because they can help us whenever we meet with difficulties or questions. What’s more, it’s very important to work together as a class.

There are some other disadvantages besides these. Firstly, it will be harmful to our eyes if we look at a computer screen for a long time. Secondly, it takes us too much time to play computer games and we may get addicted to it. It would be very difficult to get rid of the bad habit. What’s worse, we may have access to the scenes of violence and sex.

In a word, if we use the Internet in a proper way, it can help us a lot without bringing trouble.

【解析】文章要求根据现如今，网络已成为日常生活中必不可少的工具，它给我们带来很大便利的同时，也有很多弊端。谈一下自己的看法。文章用一般现在时来写，用第三人称形式。主要分为三部分：先写网络的重要作用和自己的观点：电脑不能代替老师上课，不在网上学习可以增强合作的能力；然后写网络的其他缺点，长时间看电脑的危害。最后写我们要合理利用网络，扬长避短。

写作时要注意要点全面，观点明确，结构清晰。还要注意语言的运用，如宾语从句that computers can give us lessons instead of teachers. it takes us too much time to do sth.句型，词语face to face, be harmful to, get addicted to, have access to等和连接词In my view, What’s more, Firstly, Secondly, What’s worse, In a word等。