分析 本篇作文要求考生向家长说明换智能手机的理由,即考生需要写智能手机的好处.注意分点列举.写作时为了语言的连贯应该恰当使用连接词和插入语以及注意高级词汇和句式的使用.
重要短语:
In the first place,首先,In addition而且,be addicited in,沉溺于
高分句子:
I really need a Mobile phone for it is necessary and important in modern society as it brings a lot of convenient to lives and provides a new way for me to contact with you and my friends.本句为长复合句,包含as引导的原因状语从句.
解答 I really need a Mobile phone for it is necessary and important in modern society as it brings a lot of convenient to lives and provides a new way for me to contact with you and my friends.(高分句型)
In the first place,mobile phone makes my study more efficient.I can use mobile phones to search data,to delivery files and so on.For our students,we can use mobile phone to do some readings at any time and any places without carrying a book.
In addition,mobile phone makes our lives be more wonderful in that,it has been added more and more functions,such as watching movies,listening to music and writing blog,etc.(条理清晰说明原因)
In a word,mobile phone provides great convenient for our lives,and can make my live more wonderful and brings me an easier way to contact with the world.And I promise if I have it,I would not be addicited to it.So,can I have one?(提出要求)
点评 在写作中,除了保证单词的正确性和高级性,重要的就是要尽量运用多样化的句式,注意长短句的结合、简单句和复合句的结合,使文章看起来有水平不单调.
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