Question

【题目】书面表达

请根据以下提示，并结合事例，用英语写一篇短文。

People are always looking for someone to look up to and imitate (模仿). However, you can set the example by changing yourself to become the person that people want to be like.

注意：①除诗歌外，文体不限； ②内容必须结合你生活中的一个事例；③文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；④词数不少于120，不得抄写提示语原句。

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Answer 1

【答案】

Such human nature that people tend to look for an idol in their life, holding the belief that they can become better by following the example of their idol, However, we can be others’ idol if we change ourselves and become the person we want to be.

I can’t help recalling the time when I first entered high school, Having failed the entrance exam, I was admitted to an ordinary high school, which disappointed me a lot, I was very bitter and rude, looking down upon everyone at school, Then one day I told myself I couldn’t be like this any longer, Maybe I shouldn’t look for someone to admire but should change myself first, I tried to improve myself a bit and tried to be friendlier to others. As a result, I found myself a lot happier and I was even awarded the title of “Excellent Student” at the end of term.

Life is a constant exercise in self-improvement, Changing yourself to a better self is definitely better than looking for someone better to imitate, Change yourself, and you will make the earth a better world day by day.

【解析】

试题分析：考查开放性作文写作,开放性作文用英文给出了一个话题，并有部分的文字提示。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，注意要结合你生活中的一个事例。

【亮点说明】文章使用了很好的短语和句子：tend to趋向于，hold the belief坚持认为，can’t help doing情不自禁做某事，admit to被录取，look down upon看不起，As a result结构，the belief that they can become better by following the example of their idol是一句同位语从句，we can be others’ idol if we change ourselves and become the person we want to be是一句条件状语从句.,which disappointed me a lot是非限制性定语从句，Change yourself, and you will make the earth a better world day by day.是一句祈使句。