Question

5．中国每年都会发生好几十万起交通事故，许多人都因此而丧生．据2009有关部门统计，中国的交通事故还在成倍的上升．请针对这一社会问题谈谈造成此状况的主要原因并提出解决的方法．
注意：
1．词数120-150；
2．可适当发挥，以使行文连贯；
3．参考词汇：drunk driving醉酒开车；the speed limit限速．

Answer 1

分析 本文为话题作文．
话题背景为：中国每年都会发生好几十万起交通事故，许多人都因此而丧生．据2009有关部门统计，中国的交通事故还在成倍的上升．
写作要点为：1，描述话题内容；2，分析原因；3，提供建议及呼吁．

解答 Possible version：
Owing to several hundred thousand traffic accidents，tbousands of people lost their lives annually in China．A survey conducted in 2009 showed that the car accidents were still increasing at a very high rate．
As far as I'm concerned，there are several reasons for the high increase of the traffic accidents．Firstly，the fast growing number of private cars may cause severe traffic accidents．Secondly，Drunk driving may be a deadly killer．Thirdly，some drivers ignore the speed limit and drive too fast．
Then，by what means shall we decrease the traffic accidents in China？My first suggestion is to develop adequate public transportation which is effective and punctual．Meanwhile，we should punish the drunk drivers severely．Punishments should range from a large fine to imprisonment．Last but not least，we should stick to the speed limit and drive safely．

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