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8．我们的环境质量已经成为一个重要问题，造成这个问题的原因有很多，我们也采取了一些措施去解决这个问题，根据下列提示完成作文．
注意：1、短文必须包括所有要点；
2、词数150左右；
3、短文开头已写好，不计入总词数．
Today the quality of our natural environment has become an important issue．This problem results from various reasons．
The world population is rising so quickly that the world has become too crowded．We are running out of our natural resources and at the same time polluting our environment with dangerous chemicals．（高分句型一）If we continue to do this，life on earth cannot survive．Concerned people have made some progress in environmental protection．Governments of many countries have established laws to protect the air，forests and sea resources and to stop environmental pollution．Still more measures should be taken to solve environmental problems．People should be further educated to recognize the importance of the problems，to use modern methods of birth control，to conserve our natural resources and recycle our products．（高分句型二）
In my opinion，I think we should take measures to control the increase of population，and every one of us should try his best to protect our environment．（高分句型三）If all of us can do our part，I am sure that we can have a better and cleaner place in the future．．

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分析 本篇书面表达属于开放类作文，根据提示信息我们的环境质量已经成为一个重要问题，造成这个问题的原因有很多，我们也采取了一些措施去解决这个问题，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：分别从出现的问题和应对的措施两个方面来讨论该话题 2、要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态； 4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：result from由…导致；run out out用光，用尽； In my opinion以我的观点来看；take measures to采取措施做某事；
We are running out of our natural resources and at the same time polluting our environment with dangerous chemicals．（高分句型一）
People should be further educated to recognize the importance of the problems，to use modern methods of birth control，to conserve our natural resources and recycle our products．（高分句型二）
    In my opinion，I think we should take measures to control the increase of population，and every one of us should try his best to protect our environment．（高分句型三）

解答 Today the quality of our natural environment has become an important issue．This problem results from various reasons．
      The world population is rising so quickly that the world has become too crowded．We are running out of our natural resources and at the same time polluting our environment with dangerous chemicals．（高分句型一）If we continue to do this，life on earth cannot survive．Concerned people have made some progress in environmental protection．Governments of many countries have established laws to protect the air，forests and sea resources and to stop environmental pollution．Still more measures should be taken to solve environmental problems．People should be further educated to recognize the importance of the problems，to use modern methods of birth control，to conserve our natural resources and recycle our products．（高分句型二）
      In my opinion，I think we should take measures to control the increase of population，and every one of us should try his best to protect our environment．（高分句型三）If all of us can do our part，I am sure that we can have a better and cleaner place in the future．

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．