Question

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请从这则寓言中提炼出一个恰当的主题，写一篇不少于120词的读后感．内容包括：
1．简要概括这则寓言；
2．谈谈你的理解或感受；
3．以你或你身边的人或事加以论证．
【注意】
1．不得直接引用原文中的句子；
2．文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称，否则记"零"分．

Answer 1

分析 写好这类作文要注意几个步骤：1． 认真审题，找准提示语中的关键词或句，确定中心思想．2． 依据关键句，草拟提纲，梳理文章的脉络3． 准确定位人称、时态．注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．4．最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等
高分句型一：
If the peacock had realized this，she would not have been so upset，then would have shown her beautiful figures and been proud of herself
如果孔雀意识到了这一点，她就不会那么伤心了，那么她就会表现出她美丽的身材，为自己感到骄傲．
高分句型二：
Never will he know how we admire him!In fact nobody can develop very well in all aspects even if he/she is a talent．
永远不会他知道如何欣赏他！事实上没有人可以发展得很好的各个方面即使他/她是一个人才．

解答 The fable is about a peacock who complains about her ugly voice ignoring her true beauty．But a fox advises her to be content with what she owns．
    After reading it I understand that we teenagers should find and make good use of our advantages，stopping complaining the shortcomings all the time．If the peacock had realized this，she would not have been so upset，then would have shown her beautiful figures and been proud of herself（高分句型一）．
    Many people around me make the same mistake，who only focus on what they cannot get．Take my friend Mike as an example．He does very well in all subjects，ranking as Top 10 in most of the exams．But he usually complains that he can't play basketball well because he is not tall enough．Never will he know how we admire him!In fact nobody can develop very well in all aspects even if he/she is a talent（高分句型二）．So we should stay positive and value what vvc have instead of complaining too much．

点评 开放性作文给出一定的写作主题，并此为基础进行思维和联想，自由发挥．不仅考查学生在内容、结构安排、语言运用和组织方面的能力，而且对学生的想像力、发散思维、归纳判断能力也有很高的要求．