Question

【题目】假定你是李华，你的美国网友Mike因工作出色被公司奖励中国十日游，他来信请你推荐旅游路线。请你给他回一封邮件，内容包括：

1.表示祝贺；

2.推荐旅游路线；

3.期待回复。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Mike,

I’m glad to know that you’ve been awarded by your company a ten-day tour of China because of your outstanding performance at work. Congratulations!

To guarantee you an enjoyable and unforgettable trip in China, I’ d like to recommend you one of the most popular and classic traveling routes. That is, a guided ten-day tour of Beijing, Shanghai and Hainan. During the trip, you can see many ancient historical sites, enjoy amazingly beautiful scenery, experience different Chinese traditions and cultures, and taste various Chinese cuisines. I’ m sure you’ll be deeply impressed by all of these.

What do you think of my recommendation? Looking forward to your reply!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件。请你向Mike推荐旅游路线。

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时

结构：三段式结构：第一段表达祝贺；第二段推荐路线；第三段期待回信。

要求：1.表示祝贺；

2.推荐旅游路线；

3.期待回复。

第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）

ten-day；outstanding；performance；congratulations；guarantee；recommend；one of the most …；historical sites；beautiful scenery；traditions and cultures；Chinese cuisines；be impressed by；recommendation；look forward to等

第三步：连词成句

1. I’m glad to know that you’ve been awarded by your company a ten-day tour of China because of your outstanding performance at work.

2. I’ d like to recommend you one of the most popular and classic traveling routes. T

3. you can see many ancient historical sites, enjoy amazingly beautiful scenery, experience different Chinese traditions and cultures, and taste various Chinese cuisines.

4. I’ m sure you’ll be deeply impressed by all of these.

5. What do you think of my recommendation?

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

That is；and等

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，

第五步：润色修改