Question

【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文 中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）,并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改:在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

When my father left a store and returned to his car yesterday, he suddenly realised that he' d lock his keys and cell phone inside and didn't know why he could get his spare key. A teenager ride a bike saw him kick about a tire and asked what was wrong. My father explained his situation. The teenager handed my father his cell phone, "Call your wife but tell her I'm coming get the key.” That was a round trip of seven mile, but the teenager didn't mind. An hour late, he returned with the key. My father offers him some money, but they refused. Then, like a cowboy in movies, he rode off into the sunset.

Answer 1

【答案】1. lock → locked

2. why → how

3. ride → riding

4.去掉about

5. but → and

6.在get前面加to

7. mile → miles

8. late → later

9. offers → offered

10. they → he

【解析】

这是一篇记叙文。文章讲述了，父亲正要回家时，发现钥匙被锁在车里，一好心少年不求回报骑行7公里帮父亲回家拿钥匙。

1. 考查过去分词。从句谓语动词lock这个动作发生在主句谓语动词realised（一般过去时）此动作之前，“过去的过去”，lock应用过去完成时（had done）。故将lock改为locked。

2. 考查宾语从句引导词。know后面接了一个宾语从句，此处指“不知如何拿到备用钥匙”，表方式，应用how。故将why改为how。

3. 考查现在分词。A teenager和动词ride是逻辑上的主动关系，用现在分词（doing）表主动作A teenager的后置定语。故将ride改为riding。

4. 考查及物动词。kick（踢）是及物动词，后面直接加宾语，去掉about。故去掉about。

5. 考查连词。由语境可知，Call your wife 和tell her是并列关系，应用并列连词and。故将but改为and。

6. 考查动词不定式。此处指“我会去拿钥匙”，表目的，应用动词不定式（to do）表目的，加介词to。故在get前面加to。

7. 考查名词的数。此处指“七公里”，名词mile应用复数形式。故将mile改为miles。

8. 考查副词。此处指“之后”，应用副词later。故将late改为later。

9. 考查时态。本文事情已发生，时态以一般过去时为主，offer这个动作发生在过去，应用一般过去时。故将offers改为offered。

10. 考查代词。此处指“那个男孩拒绝了”，应用人称代词he指代。故将they改为he。