Question

现在，大多数学生选择住校， 在寝室里同学之间难免会发生一些小摩擦。 上周二晚上十点半，张方和李华发生了争吵（张方开灯学习，疲惫一天的李华无法入睡）,双方都不肯让步......），你当时在场，努力地让他们冷静下来，告知他们同学之间都应该彼此理解。他们意识到错误并重修于好。你觉得同学之间应该要互相理解，要交流并包容才能营造和谐的环境。请用英文写一篇关于这件事的短文。词数：100-120。你的文章应包括下列要点：
1.张方和李华发生争吵；2.你帮助解决他们之间的矛盾；3.你的看法。
注：争吵quarrel 重修于好： make up; 包容： tolerate （开头已给出）
Creating a harmonious（和谐 ）environment
Now in our school, as many students live in the school dormitories, it is hard to avoid quarrels. ___________________________________________________________

Answer 1

Creating a harmonious environment
Now in our school, as many students live in the school dormitories, it is hard to avoid quarrels. Last Tuesday Zhang Fang stayed up doing her homework after 10:30pm in the dormitory. Feeling tired, Li Hua went to bed immediately. But she couldn't fall asleep with lights on. She got so angry that she lost her temper and quarreled with Zhang Fang. Neither of them would give in and the quarrel continued. While they were quarreling, I tried to calm them down, saying all of us should care about others. They realized their mistakes and made up finally.
After all, we share the same school and everyone is part of the big family. Whenever we face any problem, we should learn to understand and communicate with each other. Only when we think more for others can we create a harmonious environment.

解析试题分析：本文属于记叙文。记叙了同学之间发生的一次小摩擦，审题时注意本文使用一般过去时，叙述事实的时候以时间为顺序。用合适的连词把各句连接成一个有机的整体，同时要用相对高级的词汇提升文章的层次和文采。在发表你的看法的时候，可以使用谚语让文章更有亮点。
考点：考查记叙文短文写作
点评：记叙文的写作近几年考查较少，写作的时候要注意要点的全覆盖，不能有遗漏或省略，同时要注意使用合适的连接词和较高级的词汇。注意所使用的语法规则的准确性和合理性。变化使用多种句式让文章更有亮点。