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假设英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文, 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文
中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处错误。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2、只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Yesterday morning, I was surprising to hear that my best friend Allee has been
hit by a car and was in hospital. The other day when he was going to cross a street,
he was such careful that he didn’t go until he saw the traffic light to turn green. But
hardly had he got to the middle of the street while he saw a car suddenly appear on
his right-hand side and come directly towards them. It was too late for Allee to
escape. He was hit by the car or was thrown a few meters away. He was sent to the
nearest hospital immediately and had operation. When I went to see him, he was
out of dangers but still looked pale. I sincere hope he will recover and return to
normal as soon as possible.


【小题1】surprising改成surprised
【小题2】has改成had
【小题3】such改成so
【小题4】to去掉 
【小题5】while改成when
【小题6】them改成 him
【小题7】or改成 and
【小题8】operation 前面加an
【小题9】dangers改成danger
【小题10】sincere改成sincerely

解析【小题1】修饰主语用过去分词转换的形容词
【小题2】他被车撞是之前已经发生的事情
【小题3】后面的形容词,用so修饰
【小题4】see sb do sth   
【小题5】固定句型hardly…when…一…就…
【小题6】him指代Allee
【小题7】上下文不是选择关系,而是并列关系
【小题8】operation是可数名词,用a修饰
【小题9】固定词组out of danger
【小题10】副词修饰动词

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