Question

英语课上，老师要求同桌同学相互修改作文。假设以下一封信为你同桌所写，请你对其进行修改。信中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（/\），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear sir,

I graduated this year and wanted to get a work. I thought I would be success, but eventually I failed. That was why I was so lazy that I didn’t want to go out. I always complained for the hot weather. And there was another reason nobody know about: I regarded myself as someone who couldn’t do anything lonely. I often felt less capably than others. When I found a company was advertising, I was even afraid to call to ask for detail. I wanted to make a move, and I was always disappointed. What should I do? I’m looking forward to receive your reply.                                                                                                                                                                        

                                                                         Yours

Li Ming

Answer 1

Dear sir,

I graduated this year and wanted to get a work. I thought I would be ^ success, but eventually I failed.

              ( 删除a 或把work 改成job)    (插入a或把success改成successful)

That was why I was so lazy that I didn’t want to go out. I always complained for the hot weather. And there because of /about was another reason nobody know about: I regarded myself as someone who couldn’t do anything lonely. I knew alone often felt less capably than others. When I found a company was advertising, I was even afraid to call to ask capable for detail. I wanted to make a move, and I was always disappointed. What should I do? I’m looking details but forward to receive your reply.                                                                                                                                             receiving                                                                 Yours

Li Ming