Question

假如你是李华，你校外教Johnny准备周末去附近的云雾山探险旅游，写信向你询问注意事项。请你根据下列提示，给他回一封电子邮件。

1. 准备一张云雾山的地图；

2. 查询当地实时天气，带上必要的衣物、食品、药品及手电筒( flashlight)；

3. 必要的话，找一位向导。

注意：1. 词数：100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。

Dear Johnny,

I’m glad to know that you will travel to and explore Yunwu Mountain. And it’s a great pleasure for me to offer you some advice.                             ___________________________________________________

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Yours,

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Johnny,

I’m glad to know that you will travel to and explore Yunwu Mountain. And it’s a great pleasure for me to offer you some advice.

First of all, you should prepare a local map of Yunwu Mountain. Before starting, you should surf the Internet to look for some information about the weather on the weekend there so as to take enough clothes and food. Meanwhile, it’s necessary to take a flashlight and some medicines. Because there are few people living in the mountain, it’s good for you to find several friends to make this exciting journey with you together. If a local guide will serve you, it will be even better.

Special care should be taken while you travel in the mountain. I wish you a good time!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：考查书信类作文的写作。是关于你校外教Johnny准备周末去附近的云雾山探险旅游，写信向你询问注意事项。请你根据下列提示，给他回一封电子邮件，具体信息已经给出，考点只需要适当串联即可，在写作的时候一定要使用合适的连接词来连接全文，让文章成为一个整体，同时要注意使用英语句型，也要使用倒装句，定语从句等特殊的句式来提高文章的多样性。如Because there are few people living in the mountain, it’s good for you to find several friends to make this exciting journey with you together.还要用适当的关联词把句与句连起来，如：  First of all，meanwhile等

考点：考查书信类作文的写作

点评：本文属于书信类作文，此类作文虽然好写，但是要写出特色是很不容易的。关键是要点要全面覆盖，不能有遗漏和省略。写作的时候运用多种表达方式，让句子有变化。