假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请您修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语法错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜钱（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只充许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My brother, whom is a Harvard graduate, work in a multinational company. Recently, the company has failed several time in its attempts to break into the Chinese market. As a new manager in the charge of the sales department, he is trying every possible means to promote the products of his company. Because he has taken some effective measures, the profits are expected to rise at 30%. I am real proud of my brother. What’s more, she has promised to give me five thousand yuan while my summer holiday comes. If so, I will be able to afford go traveling. How a wonderful piece of news!
1.whom改为who
2.work改为works
3.time 改为times
4.the 去the
5.at 改为by
6.real改为really
7.she改为he
8.while改为when
9.afford ∧加to
10.How 改为What
【解析】
1.1】My brother 作先行词，后面是一个非限制性定语从句，关系代词应作从句的主语，故把whom改为who。
2.2】根据句意可知用一般现在时态，My brother 只句子主语，单数第三人称，故把work改为works。
3.3】“几次”， several 后用复数形式，所以把time 改为times。
4.4】句意：作为负责销售部门的新经理。in the charge of被---管理；in charge of管理---，根据句意所以把in the charge 中的the去掉。
5.5】rise by 上升了---，故把at 改为by。
6.6】副词修饰形容词，real是形容词，故把real改为really。句意：我真地因为我的哥哥而自豪。
7.7】根据上文说的是My brother，故把 she改为he。
8.8】此处表示“一时的动作”而不是“一段时间”，故把while改为when。句意：当我暑假到来的时候他许诺给我5000元。
9.9】can afford to do能负担得起做某事，故在afford 后加to。
10.10】此处考查的是感叹句，news 是名词，how 修饰的是形容词、副词，故把How 改为What。
考点：考查短文改错。
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