Question

文中共有10处语言错误，错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（/\）,并在该句下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

When I first learned to write in English, I run into many difficulties．The main problem was in that I always thought in Chinese but tried to translate everything into Chinese．My teacher advised me to keep diaries．I followed her advices．Happily it worked．Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paper as I was learning to express me in simple English. One day I wrote a short story and showed to my teacher．She liked it very much that she read it to the class．Everyone said the story was the good one, I was great encouraged by their words．

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 run-ran

 in去掉

 but-and

 advices-advice

 talk-talking

 me-myself

 showed后加it

 very-so

 the-a

 great-greatly

【解析】

试题分析： 文章整体时态都用的是一般过去时，故将run改为ran.

 that引导表语从句，去掉in.

 根据前文我总是用中文想，然后尽力将一切都翻译成中文。前后应该是表顺承关系。

 advice“建议”不可数名词，去掉s.

 enjoy doing sth 喜欢做某事  

 根据句意：我学会用简单的英文来表达我自己想法。me 改成myself .

 show sth to sb给某人展示某物。 

 so…that “如此…以至于”。

 每个人都说这是个好的故事。一个好故事 a good story, one 指代story，不用the 表特指。

 greatly 极大地 副词修饰动词encourage.

考点：考查学生对词汇语法掌握情况。

点评：本题考查动词时态、从句、名词、副词、冠词等，平时多积累，答题时结合句意和语法进行分析，答完后通读，是否通顺，符合逻辑。