Question

请根据以下提示，结合你生活中的一个事例，就“自信”这一话题 ，用英语写一篇短文。

If one has no confidence, there is little possibility that one can achieve anything when faced with hardships.

注意: 1. 无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语； 2. 除诗歌外，文体不限； 3. 内容必须结合生活中的一个事例； 4. 文中不得透露个人姓名和班级名称； 5. 字数120左右。

_______________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________

Answer 1

(One possible version)

Whatever one does , one should do it with confidence. Equipped with confidence, we can deal with any challenges and difficulties until we succeed.

When I entered Senior 3, I found myself faced with difficulty learning English, and even failed in my English exam. As a consequence I began to feel frustrated, losing confidence in myself. It was at this moment that my parents encouraged me, and my teachers gave me some valuable advice on my studies, telling me to be confident. With their help, I regained my confidence and began to make steady progress.

As the saying goes, where there is a will, there is a way. If we are to make a difference, we should build up our confidence, which is of vital importance if we want to overcome any obstacles and finally achieve our goal.

【解析】试题分析：这是一篇话题作文，以“自信”为话题，并结合一句格言，然后展开写作。以第一人称的形式书写自己的一段经历，属于记叙性文体。可以按照三段式结构进行写作。首段开篇点题，指出自信的重要意义，中间进行自身事例进行详细安排，注意时态使用一般过去最佳，毕竟是记叙自己的事例。末段要进行适当的总结升华，再次照应开头。篇章结构上，注意段落间的衔接性，过渡性以及合理性，提倡句式的多样性和连贯性，语言要生动形象，言辞要优美，给人一目了然的感觉。

【两点说明】这篇范文很好，第一格言使用恰到好处，例如 where there is a will, there is a way.与主题较为贴切，反应出自信的重要性。第二句式多变，非谓语动词的使用形象生动，例如Equipped with confidence, we..较好。连接词使用使文章过渡自然例如 as a consequence， with their help等等。同时使用了强调句 It was at this moment that my parents encouraged me...更加为文章增色不少。还有定语从句的运用也很好，比如：we should build up our confidence, which is of vital importance if we want to overcome any obstacles and finally achieve our goal。 其中不乏较好的词汇表达，体现了作者深厚的写作功底。

考点：考查话题类文章写作