Question

8．假设你是明启中学（Ming Qi Middle School）高三（1）班的通讯员李华，你将为你班班长王华写一份事迹报道，竞选学校的好班长称号（Mr．/Mrs．Monitor）．你的参选报道必须包括以下内容：
1、简单介绍你班班长（王华）；
2、描述班长所做的一件事；
3、说明推选班长参赛的理由．

Answer 1

分析 首先要注意审题，把题目的意思看清楚．这个题目的意思是说简单介绍你班班长（王华）；描述班长所做的一件事；说明推选班长参赛的理由．在第一段里，大家要开门见山，清楚明确地点题，然后用一个具体的事例来支持自己的观点．注意事例一定要和自己表达的中心思想紧密结合．并且事例要写出时间，事情的经过、发展和结果．最后一段归纳总结，呼应或升华文章中心．
  亮点部分
  As the monitor in my class，Wang Hua is tall and looks very confident who is always ready to help other students or teachers．（高分句型）
What impressed me most for our class is still kept in our mind．（高分句型）
Seeing that there was no sign for our classmates'participating in the task，Wang Hua stood up，beginning to clean the classroom．（高分句型）
Although there are still some meaningful things which Wang Hua has done for us，I think this story can clearly show his good personalities to compete for the Mr．Monitor．（高分句型）

解答 As the monitor in my class，Wang Hua is tall and looks very confident who is always ready to help other students or teachers．（高分句型）Meanwhile，he has a strong sense of duty．What impressed me most for our class is still kept in our mind．（高分句型）
     Several months ago，after we finished the final exam in the first term of the senior three，our teacher asked some volunteers to clean the classroom．Seeing that there was no sign for our classmates'participating in the task，Wang Hua stood up，beginning to clean the classroom．（高分句型）Then，it is certain that we were so touched by his unselfish behavior that almost all of my classmates began to help him to clean the classroom．Although there are still some meaningful things which Wang Hua has done for us，I think this story can clearly show his good personalities to compete for the Mr．Monitor．（高分句型）
     His sense of duty is the most important thing that a good monitor should have．Also，he is wise enough to encourage other people to participate in a task．

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧