Question

随着网络的发展，网上购物越来越受到人们的喜爱，网上购物的人也越来越多，请你谈谈网上购物的优点和不足之处。
写作要点：
1. 网上购物的优点      2. 网上购物的缺点         3.你的建议
要求：
1. 短文词数不少于100（不含已写好的部分）。
2. 内容充实，结构完整，语意连贯。 
3. 书写需清晰、工整。
With the rapid development of the Internet, Internet shopping is becoming a popular way of shopping. ___________________________________________________________________________________
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Answer 1

Internet shopping is a new way of shopping. It offers a number of benefits for the shoppers. The most important advantage is convenience. You can shop as you like as the on-line shops are open 24 hours a day, and you do not have to queue with other shoppers. Secondly, it is easy to find what you are looking for on the internet. Finally, it is often cheaper to buy goods through the internet.
There are disadvantages too. The main disadvantage is that you can’t actually see the products you are buying or check their quality. Also many people will miss the opportunity to talk to friends while shopping. Besides, some people are worried about paying for goods using credit cards.
In my opinion, the convenience and excitement of on line shopping is beyond all doubts. In the meantime, we must always bear in mind that certain traps do exist, so we’d better make sure the sellers are trustworthy before buying.

试题分析：本文属于提纲类作文，要点基本上都给了出来，关于网上购物的优点和不足之处，只给出了提纲，要考生自己发挥的余地很大，要考生结合自己的切身经历去写。在表达要点的时候，请务必要使用连接词把各个要点连接起来，如firstly, secondly Finally，also等词，让文章成为一个整体。在方便个人观点的时候，可以使用谚语让文章更有文采。
点评：提纲类作文的关键是把握所有的要点，不要遗漏，要使用合适的连接词来连接上下文，使之成为整体，适当使用高级词汇高级句型的利用让文章不要那么平淡，富有变化。