Question

【题目】书面表达

假如你是李芳，你的美国好友Jane数学学得不好，对自己失去了信心，产生了厌学情绪。请你给她发一封电子邮件开导她，要点如下：

1．没有必要过于伤心；

2．要振作起来，尽量减少焦虑心理；

3．和老师交流有助于你改善；

4．探索适合自己的有效学习方式。

注意：

l．词数100左右。

2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Jane，

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Yours

Li Fang

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Jane,

I am sorry to hear that you didn’t do well in maths and have lost interest in schoolwork. In my opinion, maths is difficult for most students, so there is no need to feel too bad. At this moment, you should cheer up and find ways to reduce your anxiety. Why not go on an outing with your friends or find time to listen to your favorite music? If you can talk to the teachers who you respect most, they may give you some practical advice that helps you to improve. Probably it’s time for you to explore a new learning method which is better and more suitable for you.

Anyway, I hope you can rebuild your self-confidence soon!

Yours,

Li Fang

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇话题类作文。假定你是李芳，你的英国好友Jane考试失败，对自己失去了信心，产生了厌学情绪。请你给他发一封邮件开导他，要点如下：不要过于伤心;放松，减少焦虑心理;和老师交流有助于提高成绩;探索适合自己的有效学习方法。需要写的内容已经粗略给出，需要我们翻译成完整通顺的句子，适当添加些内容，使文章更充实。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。一定要给出自己的看法。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型为文章润色。注意要求的词数100词左右，不要太多也不要太少

【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语lost interest in对。。失去兴趣；in one’s opinion在某人看来；there is no need to do 没有必要做某事；be suitable for 适合。。；If you can talk to the teachers who you respect most, they may give you some practical advice that helps you to improve这个句子运用到who引导定语从句；