Question

【题目】最近，你看到某英文报纸正在征集主题为“如何才能受人欢迎”的短文，对此你很兴趣。请你根据以下提示谈谈自己的想法，给该报社投稿。

要点提示：

1.衣着干净、整齐，保持微笑。

2. 诚实，乐于助人。

3.懂得与人合作。

4. 其他。

注意：①词数：100词左右；

②可根据内容要点适当增加细节。

How to be popular

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Answer 1

【答案】 How to be popular

Most people would like to be popular with others, but what is the secret to achieve popularity? In fact, it is very simple.The first step is to improve our appearance. We should always make sure that we are well/neatly dressed and smile warmly. In this way, people will surely be impressed by our confidence. Another step is to build our character. We should always be honest and willing to help others whenever it is necessary. If we know how to work and get on well with others, people will feel comfortable enough to trust us. Besides, to be a good listener is also important. It is a good way to show our respect for others.I am sure we will gain popularity if we can do all of the above.

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封建议信。发表对“如何才能受人欢迎”的看法。

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

人称：第一、三人称

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。

结构：总分法

要点：

1.衣着干净、整齐，保持微笑。

2. 诚实，乐于助人。

3.懂得与人合作。

4. 其他。

第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）

be popular with；secret；popularity；in fact；appearance；make sure；be well/neatly dressed；in this way；be impressed by；build our character；honest；be willing to；necessary；get on well with；a good listener；respect；gain popularity；the above等

第三步：连词成句

1. Most people would like to be popular with others.

2. What is the secret to achieve popularity?

3. We should always make sure that we are well/neatly dressed and smile warmly.

4. In this way, people will surely be impressed by our confidence.

5. We should always be honest and willing to help others whenever it is necessary.

6. If we know how to work and get on well with others, people will feel comfortable enough to trust us.

7. It is a good way to show our respect for others.

8. I am sure we will gain popularity if we can do all of the above.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

1.表文章结构顺序：the first step；another step；

2.表并列补充关系：besides；

3.表条件关系：if ；

4.表并列关系：but等

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，

第五步：润色修改