Question

第二节 书面表达（满分25分）

你校学生会需招聘一名留学生做英语学习顾问，请你以短文形式写一则招聘启事。内容主要包括：

——母语是英语，汉语流利者优先

——解答用语学习问题，协助组织英语活动

——每周4小时，报酬面议

——联系人：李华（Tel:13011223344）

注意：1。词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.启事标语和结尾已为你写好。

Answer 1

 One Possible Version

English Advisor Wanted

   The Student Union of our school decides to invite an international student to work as an English Study Advisor next term. The main responsibilities of the advisor include helping students to practice their oral English. Answering their questions, and helping organize activities such as singing English songs, English evenings, or lectures on interesting topics.

The applicant should be a native speaker of English. Fluency in Chinese is preferred. The advisor is expected to work 4 hours per week.

If you are interested, please call Li Hua at 13011223344 for an interview. Payment for the service will be discussed during the interview.

Student Union

解析:

【思路点拨】

试题为应用为习作——写一则招聘启事。试题只给出写作框架，并未给出所有的具体写作细节，为半开放性写作。写好此文，需注意二点：一是切忌照译，要适当地增加细节，恰当地使用连接过渡词，以使行文连贯。二是要注意语言的简洁性。因为是招聘启事，语言要简洁明了，让读者一读就明白了解。

【范文点评】

文章要点齐全，写作层次清楚，能紧扣要点框架。语言简洁明了“The main responsibilities of the advisor include helping …, answering…, and helping ….用几个动名词的并列形式把学习顾问的职责表达清楚。第二段列出了对于学习顾问的要求，两个被动语句的使用简介，易懂。本文精彩的地方时动名词和被动语态的灵活运用。”