Question

你校校门口在放学时间经常出现交通拥堵，给师生和路人带来很多不便。你校英文报就此向学生征集解决拥堵的良策。假如你是高三学生李华，请按下列提示用英语写一封信，向校报投稿。

1. 写信的目的。

2. 分析学校门口拥堵的原因。

3. 提出2-3点建议。

注意：词数120左右。

Dear Editor,

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Yours,

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

Dear Editor,

I am Li Hua, a senior high school student from Grade 3. I am writing to discuss the traffic problem near our

school gate.

With so many parents coming to pick up their children, traffic jams are frequent near the school gate, which

has caused a lot of inconvenience to us.

In order to avoid traffic jams, I strongly recommend some effective measures be taken. First, we should

encourage students to ride a bicycle or walk to school instead of taking a car, which not only avoids traffic jams, but also builds up students' health. It is also a good idea to allow junior students to leave school 10 minutes earlier than others, which will surely make the street less crowded. Besides, cars should not be allowed to park in front of the school gate.

I do hope my suggestions will be considered and the problem can disappear soon.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：题目要求写一篇短文，就校门口交通拥堵的现象提出自己的建议。信的要点包括：写信的目的；分析拥堵原因；提出建议。写作时注意作文的连贯性；作文词数在120词左右，不要出现拼写和标点错误；注意写信的格式。

亮点说明：

范文使用了with复合结构With so many parents coming to pick up their children；定语从句which has caused a lot of inconvenience to us，which not only avoids traffic jams，which will surely make the street less crowded，含虚拟语气的宾语从句I strongly recommend some effective measures be taken.等语法知识，使作文的说理性更强，更有说服力；

范文注意使用with, In order to等来衔接前后句，用First, Besides进行列举，使作文层次分明、条理清晰；

范文使用了较多的重点词汇：traffic jam，frequent，avoid，bicycle，suggestion，consider，disappear等，使作文的内容得到了充实；

范文还使用了较多短语和固定搭配in order to，encourage students to...，instead of，not only ...but also，builds up，allow junior students to...，in front of等，使作文句式多样，语意连贯。

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