Question

18．假设你是红星中学学生会主席李华，你校交换生Jim在给你的email中提到他对学生会组织的活动感兴趣，并希望你给他提供一项适合他参加的活动．请你给Jim回邮件，内容包括：
1．活动名称及意图；
2．活动具体安排；
3．邀请他参加．
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数． 3．学生会the Students'Union
Dear Jim，
I am so happy to know that you are interested in the activities that the Students'Union will organize．
Next Saturday，there will be a field trip to the Olympic Forest Park．Students will be walking 5km there．We will meet at 8 at the gate of the park and start our walking．All students will wear the T-shirts with our special logo．At the end of the activity we will take a group picture．（该段介绍活动名称和意图）
I strongly recommend it．（高分句型一）I believe it is good way to get close to nature，work out，have fun and promote the relationship．It will help you know more about your companions．（高分句型二）What's more，it is wonderful to exercise while enjoying the great view．
Please join us!
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本文属于提纲作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题．平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果．（高分句型一）I believe it is good way to get close to nature，work out，have fun and promote the relationship．
该句中固定短语a good way to do sth意为做某事好的方法，后用三个动词 nature，work out，have fun and promote 做定语；
（高分句型二）What's more，it is wonderful to exercise while enjoying the great view．
该句型使用it is adj．to do sth做某事…；while引导时间状语从句，意思当…时候；

解答 Dear Jim，
      I am so happy to know that you are interested in the activities that the Students'Union will organize．
      Next Saturday，there will be a field trip to the Olympic Forest Park．Students will be walking 5km there．We will meet at 8 at the gate of the park and start our walking．All students will wear the T-shirts with our special logo．At the end of the activity we will take a group picture．（该段介绍活动名称和意图）
      I strongly recommend it．（高分句型一）I believe it is good way to get close to nature，work out，have fun and promote the relationship．It will help you know more about your companions．（高分句型二）What's more，it is wonderful to exercise while enjoying the great view．
      Please join us!
                                                                                                                                                                                                  Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                 Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．