Question

【题目】假如你是一名导游，陪同某国际旅行社游览长城。车抵长城，下车前你准备对大家作必要的介绍和交代。请拟一份讲话稿。讲话稿必须包括以下几点：

1. 简单介绍长城（世界上最长的城墙，有2000多年的历史，是世界奇观之一）；

2. 讲话的时间是8点半，在长城逗留两个半小时，11点钟离开：

3. 游览车（bus）在入口处等候，记住车号，准时返回：

4. 贵重（valuable）物品随身携带，下车前关上车窗；

5. 祝大家玩得愉快。

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Answer 1

【答案】

Ladies and Gentlemen,

Here we are at the foot of the Great Wall! It is the longest wall in the world and has a history of over 2000 years. It is one of the wonders in the world. We’ll spend two hours and a half here. It’s 8:30 now. we’ll leave here at 11:00. The bus will be waiting for us at the entrance. Please remember our bus number and be back on time. Besides, please take your valuable things with you and shut all the windows before you get off.

Have a good time!

【解析】

试题分析：本文是提纲类写作，要点已给出，写作时不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯，同时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。

【亮点说明】本文是一篇讲话稿，内容齐全，要点明确，句子衔接紧密。It is the longest wall in the world and has a history of over 2000 years.运用最高级；The bus will be waiting for us at the entrance.使用将来进行时态；please take your valuable things with you and shut all the windows before you get off.祈使句和时间状语从句完美结合；另外，Besides的运用为文章增色添彩。