Question

17．假如你是李华，某校高一的学生，要参加学校举办的主题为"How to Live a Colorful Life on Campus"的演讲比赛．请撰写一份演讲稿．主要内容包括：
1．学生有必要使自己的校园生活丰富多彩；
2．有许多方式可以丰富高中校园生活；
3．以自己为例，提出建议．
注意：1．短文须包括以上所有内容要点．
2．词数100字左右；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
Dear students，
I am Li Hua from Senior One．The topic of my speech is"How to Live a Colorful Life on Campus"．
                                                                        
Thank you!

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
So it is necessary for students to enrich their campus life．对于学生而言，丰富校园生活是非常有必要的．
高分句型二：
Besides taking part in the activities on campus，students can also do some social practice，which is necessary for them to expand their horizon．除了参加校园的课外活动，学生也可以参加社会实践活动，那对于开阔他们的眼界是非常有必要的．
句型一 it is necessary for students to enrich their campus life 该句中包含一个固定句型：it is+adj+for sb to do sth 对于某人而言做．．是．．
句型二 which is necessary for them to expand their horizon．该句是一个由which引导的非限制性定语从句，which在从句中充当主语，替代前面的先行词social practice

解答 Dear students，
    I am Li Hua from Senior One．The topic of my speech is"How to Live a Colorful Life on Campus"．
   Nearly all students want to make their life on campus as colorful as possible．With a colorful life，students can feel meaningful and confident．So it is necessary for students to enrich their campus life．（提出话题）（高分句型一）
   There are several ways to live a colorful life on campus．It is a good choice for students to join various clubs and groups．By doing so，students can make a lot of friends whose interests are similar to theirs．Besides taking part in the activities on campus，students can also do some social practice，which is necessary for them to expand their horizon．（方法罗列）（高分句型二）
   Taking myself as an example，I love to dance and join the dance club．I enjoy dancing with my friends and learn a lot from them．Moreover，I take an active part in social practice．Bothe are helpful to make my life on campus more enjoyable．Therefore，let's make our campus life more colorful．
   Thank you!

点评 该书面表达为提纲类，该类作文一般规定了考生的写作思路，罗列出了相应的写作要点．考生在平时应注意积累相应的词汇和短语，在写作时尽量做到将要点与主题紧密结合，用准确的、简洁明了的语言将作文展示出来．