Question

8．请阅读下面短文，并按要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章
Behavioral scientists have done countless experiments to prove that any human being tends to repeat an act which has been immediately followed by a pleasant result．In one such experiment，a number of schoolchildren were divided into three groups and given arithmetic tests daily for five days．One group was consistently praised for its previous performance； another group was criticized； the third was ignored．
Not surprisingly，those who were praised improved dramatically．Those who were criticized improved also but not so much．And the scores of the children who were ignored hardly improved at all．Interestingly，the brightest children were helped just as much by criticism as by praise，but the less able children reacted badly to criticism，who needed praise the most．Yet the latter are the very youngsters who，in most schools，fail to get the pat on the back．
To give praise costs the giver nothing but a moments thought and a moment's effort一perhaps a quick phone call to pass on a compliment （称赞），or five minutes spent writing an appreciative letter．
It is such a small investment一and yet consider the results it may produce．"I can live for two months on a good compliment，"said Mark Twain．

写作内容
1．用约30个单词写出上文的概要；
2．用约120个单词发表你的观点，内容包括：
（1）赞扬别人对自己和对方带来的影晌；
（2）请以你的日常生活经历的事情为例，说明别人的赞扬对你的影响．
写作要求
1．作文中可使用自己亲身经历或虚构的故事；
2．阐述观点或提供论据时，不能直接引用原文语句；
3．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；‘
4．不必写标题．
评分标准
内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当．
The experiments done by the behavioral scientists shows thatthose who were praised improved dramatically and that those who were criticizedimproved also but not so much and that the scores of the children who wereignored hardly improved at all．We can conclude that the praise has a great influence on the students'improving．
I remember the first time that I did lunch．When I got home from schoolas a teenager，my mother went to pick cotton in the field，I wanted to let my mother eat the lunch I did．But I didn't know what to doand how to do it．Although I overcame many unexpected difficulties，the lunch tasted bad，and I felt sorry to tell mymother．Unexpectedly，my mother praised me for it，and so I liked cooking more and more．As a result，I can cook many kinds ofdishes for my families．
Thanks to my mother，it was her praise thatencouraged me to go on．The more praise the child get，the more he can do．．

Answer 1

分析 本文是读写任务型写作，这类作文可按照"三段式"模板写：第一段：概况所给短文要点．第二段：过渡词引出主题句---阐述理由或列举事例．第三段：个人观点．特别要注意第一段的概括．用自己的语言概括，不能照搬照抄原文．时态一般用一般过去时或一般现在时．人称一般用第三人称．重要短语：have a great influence on …（对 …有很大影响），overcame difficulties （克服困难），praise sb for sth （因某事赞扬某人），as a result （所以），thanks to…（多亏了…），the first time that…（第一次做…的时候），pick cotton （摘棉花），feel sorry to do（做…觉得抱歉）．

解答 The experiments done by the behavioral scientists shows thosewho were praised improved dramatically and that those who were criticizedimproved also but not so much and that the scores of the children who wereignored hardly improved at all．【高分句型】（概括）
We can conclude that the praise has a great influence on the students'improving．（别人赞扬对自己和对方带来的影响）I remember the first time that I did lunch．When I got home from school as a teenager，my mother went to pickcotton in the field，I wanted to let my mother eat the lunch I did．But I didn't know what to doand how to do it．Although I overcame many unexpected difficulties，the lunch tasted bad，and I felt sorry to tell mymother．【高分句型】Unexpectedly，my mother praised me for it，and so I liked cooking more and more．As a result，I can cook many kinds ofdishes for my families．（举日常生活经历为例，说明别人的赞扬对自己的影响）
   Thanks to my mother，it was her praise thatencouraged me to go on．The more praise the child get，the more he can do．【高分句型】（总结）

点评 读写任务型写作是将阅读与写作有机结合，要求考生既能读懂文章信息，又要依据要求规范连贯地表达内容，其中准确概括很有挑战且十分重要，根据记叙文、议论文、说明文等不同文体作相应概括，总的来说，遵循以下步骤：确定主题句；寻找关键词；重构主题句；重组支持句．