Question

【题目】假设你是李明，你打算和几位朋友在暑假进行一次旅行。请根据所给信息，给住在另一座城市的外籍朋友戴维发一封电子邮件介绍这次旅行计划，并邀请他一起旅行。

主要内容包括：

1.地点：海南岛Hainan Island; 时间：7月15日-21日

2.活动包括远足(hike)、爬山、游泳、篝火晚会(campfire party)和潜水(diving)

3.注意事项：请带好游泳衣(bathing suit)和护照(passport)

注意： 词数100左右,可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯.

Dear David,

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Yours

Li Ming

Answer 1

【答案】Dear David,

How is everything going? My friends and I have decided to go on an adventure trip to Hainan Island during the summer holiday. I am writing to tell you about our travel plan.

We will be traveling around Hainan Island from July 15 to 21. While there we will go hiking, climb the mountains, swim near the beach and have a campfire party. We also plan to go diving if weather permits. I’d like you to join us if possible. I am sure we will have a lot of fun being together.

Please remember to pack your bathing suit and take your passport.

I am looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Ming

【解析】本篇作文是开放性作文。开放性作文要求学生根据提供的情景，在短时间内写一段文字。开放性作文更能反映出考生的综合素质和真实的写作水平，更有利于开展中学生英语素质教育，更符高考改革趋势。

亮点：本文要点齐全，语句通顺，语言地道。在句式方面，使用了多种复合句。比如宾语从句，状语从句，祈使句等。同时使用多种时态。比如用将来进行时，现在进行时，现在完成时等，使文章生动丰富。

宾语从句：I am sure we will have a lot of fun being together.

祈使句： Please remember to pack your bathing suit and take your passport.

状语从句：While there we will go hiking, climb the mountains, swim near the beach and have a campfire party.

We also plan to go diving if weather permits.

I’d like you to join us if possible.

将来完成进行时：We will be traveling around Hainan Island from July 15 to 21.

固定句式：How is everything going?