Question

【题目】短文改错

短文中共有10处语言错误，每句话最多两处错误。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在此处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出增加的词;

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉;

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从十一处起）不计分。

Everyone has a dream. We are on the way to achieve it whether the way is smooth or toughly. As senior 3 student, I have the same dream as my classmates that I can be admitted to an ideal university. In the past three years, I have done everything I can to equip myself with that I have learnt from my teachers. Not only have I enjoyed the pleasure of study but also I have got closer to my dream. Anxious and pressure did discourage from me at times. Besides, with the encouragement of my teachers and classmates, I think I’ll make it.

I’m sure that there has still a long way to go to achieve my dream. No matter how challenged it is, I’ll make it come true. As the proverb said,” Where there’s a will, there’s a way.”

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】achieve改为achieving

【2】toughly改为tough

【3】Senior前加 a

【4】that改为what

【5】anxious改为anxiety

【6】去掉from

【7】Besides改为However

【8】has改为is

【9】challenged改为challenging

【10】said改为says

【解析】

【1】achieve改为achieving；固定用法：be on the way to doing。这里的to是介词，后面应该用动名词形式。故将achieve改为achieving。

【2】toughly改为tough；考查形容词修饰系动词。is是系动词，应该用形容词来修饰，toughly是副词。故将toughly改为tough。

【3】Senior前加 a；考查冠词。student是可数名词。故在Senior前加 a。

【4】把equip myself with 后的that改为what；考查宾语从句。with是介词，后面应该接宾语，that不能引导宾语从句。故把equip myself with 后的that改为what。

【5】anxious改为anxiety；这一句的主语是anxious and pressure，但是anxious是形容词，不能做主语，故将anxious改为anxiety。

【6】去掉from；固定用法。discourage 是及物动词，后面直接接名词。故去掉from。

【7】Besides改为However；前一句句意;紧张和压力有时候确实会让我泄气。后一句句意：在老师和同学的鼓励下，我认为我可以成功。两句没有明显的并列关系，而是转折的关系，故将Besides改为However。

【8】has改为is；固定句型：there be 句型。故将has改为is。

【9】challenged改为challenging；考查challenge的形容词词意。challenged受到挑战的；challenging具有挑战性的。而文中句意，根据上下文，应该是无论它有多具有挑战力…故将challenged改为challenging。

【10】said改为says；常规用法。名言、谚语、俗语等是客观存在的，应该用一般现在时来表达，故将said改为says。