Question

【题目】昨天上午，你校组织了一场“和榜样学习”的励志宣讲会。宣讲会，来自各个年级的学霸们都讲述了自己的学习心得并分享了具体的学习方法。作为一名高三学生，你听完宣讲会后感触颇深。请你根据以下内容写一篇参会感想。

写作要点：

1.简单总结并评价这次宣讲会；

2.你从宣讲会中学到了什么。

注意：

1.词数不少于100；

2.可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯；

3.宣讲会：an inspirational meeting

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Answer 1

【答案】Yesterday morning, an inspirational meeting was held in our school. Many top students in our school shared their study experience and unique learning methods, which are beneficial to those who are confused about their studies. In my opinion, the meeting was a big success, and what it provided for us was quite valuable.

As for me, I have learnt a lot from the meeting. First, I have realized a positive attitude plays an important role in our studies. No matter what problems we may meet, we should always try our best to find solutions with strong determination. Then, I have known many useful learning methods and will apply them to my study. Lastly, I have become more confident about myself. I strongly believe I can prove my ability through hard work.

【解析】这篇作文要求写一篇会后感想，要点应包括宣讲会的大体内容以及自己从中学到了什么。本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。

【亮点说明】本篇范文结构合理，能够将要点描写完整，完全符合作文的要求。作者在范文中使用了较多的复杂句式，例如Many top students in our school shared their study experience and uniqur learning methods, which are beneficial to those who are confused about their studies.这个句子包含了一个定语从句，No matter what problems we may meet, we should always try our best to find solutions with strong determination.这个句子包含了一个no matter引导的让步状语从句。这些高级句式的使用显示出了作者深厚的英语功底。