Question

【题目】假如你是李华，假期观看了主题是人与自然的电影《狼图腾》 (Wolf Totem)深有感触。你写了一篇观后感准备给你们学校的校报英语版投稿，现在你通过电子邮件将这篇观后感发给英国笔友Tom，请他帮忙在下周三之前完成修改，并把这部电影推荐给他。

注意:1.词数100左右:

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Tom,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Tom,

How is everything going? During the holidays I saw a film called Wolf Totem, whose theme is people and nature. The film is really a hit in China. Have you heard of it?

After seeing the film, deeply touched, I wrote a review and now I intend to contribute it to my school newspaper. I have attached it to this email. Will you please help me correct the grammatical mistakes and polish the article? If possible, you'd better finish it by next Wednesday. I would appreciate it if you could help me.

By the way, the film is really wonderful. I know you are a film fan. Therefore, 1 strongly recommend it t0 you. I am convinced that you will fall in love with it as well.

Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封书信，请英国笔友Tom帮忙修改你写的电影《狼图腾》的观后感，并把这部电影推荐给他。

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文；

人称：第一人称；

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时；

结构：总-分-总法

第二步：列提纲（重点单词和词组）

hear of；deeply touched；intend to；contribute to；attach..to；if possible；appreciate；by the way

recommend...to；convince；fall in love with；as well；look forward to等；

第三步：连词成句

1. During the holidays I saw a film called Wolf Totem, whose theme is people and nature.

2. After seeing the film, deeply touched, I wrote a review and now I intend to contribute it to my school newspaper.

3. If possible, you'd better finish it by next Wednesday. I would appreciate it if you could help me.

4. Therefore, 1 strongly recommend it t0 you.

5. I am convinced that you will fall in love with it as well.

6. Looking forward to your early reply.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

1.表并列补充关系：and；if possible；by the way等；

2.表因果关系：Therefore等；

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。

第五步：润色修改