Question

【题目】下图反映的是国家近十年来对不同类型能源利用比重变化的调査结果，请根据图表显示的内容，用英语写一篇150字左右的短文：

你的短文应包含以下内容：

1. 描述图表中反映的主要变化；

2. 分析这种变化对社会和环境产生的影响；

3. 根据你所学到的相关知识，谈谈今后对不同类型能源利用的建议。

注意:1. 不必写标题；

2. 可参照图表适当发挥；

3. 作文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。

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Answer 1

【答案】The pie charts present the changes of the percentages of the energy produced from various sources in our country from 2007 to 2017.

Apparently, oil was the most dominant source from which the energy was produced, although its percentage dropped from 52% to 39%. Likewise, nuclear also declined, becoming the third primary source of energy. The percentage of natural gas, on the other hand, witnessed the most noticeable increase during the period, rising from 13% to 23%.

Coal and other renewable resources saw the rise of 5% and 3% respectively. Interestingly, the proportion of the energy produced from the hydrogen, though not widely used, remained stable. Overall, this trend helps guarantee sustainable economic growth, improve the environment and reduce the cost of living.

To my mind, we should enforce the use of other renewable resources such as solar energy, wind energy and water energy to protect our limited resources.

【解析】本篇书面表达属于图表类作文写作。

第一段：概述图表显示的内容。可以用下这些句子开头:In the picture above we can see...; There is a cartoon about...; As we can see in the picture...; From the picture, we can see that...; 或者It can be seen/concluded from the picture that...等等。第二段：描述图片反映的国家近十年来对不同类型能源利用比重变化的调査结果，这一段是重点，要详写。第三段：简单概述自己的观点，总结全文。切记一定要充分理解图片内容，注意上下文要连贯，要完整。同时注意综合运用语法与句法结构，按照行文逻辑组织语言，写作时要准确运用时态。尽量使用自己会的单词、词组和句型，不要刻意追求运用高级、新颖的词汇，复杂句型等语法结构，忽略了与原文语言环境的符合度和连贯度。最后也要注意不要出现单词拼写错误。

【亮点说明】

范文内容完整，上下文连贯有逻辑性，使用了较多高级表达方式：

The pie charts present the changes of the percentages of the energy produced from various sources in our country from 2007 to 2017.使用了过去分词作定语；Apparently, oil was the most dominant source from which the energy was produced, although its percentage dropped from 52% to 39%.使用了定语从句和状语从句；The percentage of natural gas, on the other hand, witnessed the most noticeable increase during the period, rising from 13% to 23%.使用了现在分词作状语；Interestingly, the proportion of the energy produced from the hydrogen, though not widely used, remained stable.使用了状语从句的省略。总之，范文用词准确，思路清晰，过渡词的使用增强了文章的连贯性。