Question

5．现在上网阅读的人越来越多，人们可以更快地从网上读到新闻，找到他们所需要的信息或下载文学作品．
1．你认为网络是否能最终代替书刊报纸？
2．举例说明你的理由．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提纲作文．根据所提供的材料，写一篇议论文，阐述网络阅读是否能最终代替书刊报纸．写作要点包括：陈述自己的观点--认为会或是认为不会；阐述选这个观点的理由．写作时应以一般现在时为主．人称以第一人称和第三人称为主．重要短语：thanks to（多亏了），get an easyaccess to （容易地获得，得到），take sthfor example（举…为例），enable sb to do （能够让某人做某事），inharmony with （与…和谐），takenthe place of（代替），plungoneself into the sth（完全投入到…），rampantconsumerism（猖獗的消费）．

解答 The digital era is upon us．Thanks to the development of technology，we can get an easy access toelectronic products，taking online reading for example．【高分句型】（开头-引出话题）
There is no denying that theexistence of e-reading enables readers to read"less costly"while enjoying thefun of reading itself．【高分句型】In addition，e-reading is space-saving and can be easily carried--who could resist thetemptation of just a couple of bits for one great works of literature？Last butnot the least，e-books are environmental friendly，in harmony with theprinciple of"leading a low-carbon lifestyle"．（网络阅读的好处）
However，I am against theidea that traditional books will completely be taken the place of by e-reading．【高分句型】（表明自己的观点） Those who enjoy reading also enjoy the touch andsmell of the printed books．Paper books，which have served as a medium of humancivilization for centuries，will always be a great option whenever people seekfor inner peace．【高分句型】And so faras I'm concerned，instead of plunging myself into the e-era，I try to find somemiddle ground between convenience and what seems to be rampant consumerism．（阐述理由）

点评 提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点，并适当增加细节．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型．