Question

19．假定你是李华，你向美国笔友Harry 介绍你校开展的学生社团活动的情况，内容要点如下：
（1）活动对象：高一和高二学生；活动时间：每周四下午第二节课以后；
（2）参加活动的意义及收获；
（3）你的感受．
参考词汇：学生会the Students'Union
注意：（1）词数100左右；（2）开头和结尾已经给出；（3）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear Harry，
Thank you for your letter asking about the club activities in our school．                                
Yours．

Answer 1

分析 本篇文章是一个提纲式作文，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确要点：（1）活动对象：高一和高二学生；活动时间：每周四下午第二节课以后；（2）参加活动的意义及收获；（3）你的感受．2、确定文章的总体框架，要在试题给出的立场的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态． 4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构．1．本文文法简单流畅，不拖泥带说，句式多样． 2．使用了多样词组 3．文章行文结构严密，能够结合自己的看法，具有现实意义 4．逻辑鲜明，思路清晰．在考场上可谓一篇高分佳作．
These clubs are set up by the Students'Union and they are intended for students from Grade One and Grade Two．（高分句型一）
The club activities，aiming to offer students more opportunities to show their different talents，benefit us a lot．（高分句型二）
Besides，we have developed different skills and many interests，which enrich our lives．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Harry，
      Thank you for your letter asking about the club activities in our school．These clubs are set up by the Students'Union and they are intended for students from Grade One and Grade Two．（高分句型一）The activities start after the second class on Thursday afternoons．
      The club activities，aiming to offer students more opportunities to show their different talents，benefit us a lot．（高分句型二）Taking part in club activities can help us to make new friends，expand our circle，and develop interpersonal skills．At the same time，these activities can help us to develop self-confidence，communicating with each other more easily．Besides，we have developed different skills and many interests，which enrich our lives．（高分句型三）
       In my opinion，I acquire more knowledge in an interesting way．Meanwhile，I bring myself more relaxation after hard study，which reduces my tiredness．
                                                                                                                                                                                                 Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                 Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．