Question

1．请根据你对如图这幅画的理解用英语写一篇短文．内容要求：
1．描述漫画内容，如情景，人物，动作等．
2．结合自身实际，谈谈你的感想．
3．举例说明你能在尊老爱老方面做些什么．
注意：
1．词数120左右．
2．参考词汇：按摩  massage  n．﹠v．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇漫画写作，主要围绕漫画谈谈尊老爱幼，写作时注意需先将漫画大致内容描述出来，在谈谈自己的感想．本文采用经典三段式写法．第一段描述漫画大致内容，第二段结合自身实际，第三段谈做法．第一段第一句Respecting the elders is a good virtue．就采用动名词做主语的句式；第一段第二句As is shown in the picture，a granddaughter might have realized that her grandma is tired from doing housework使用了as领导的状语从句；第一段最后一句So she gives her grandmother a gentle back massage，hoping that it can reduce her grandma's tiredness．使用了非谓语动词作伴随状语的句型；第二段第一句This reminds me of my parents and grandparents who have been doing whatever they can do to let me have the best education．首先使用了who领导的定语从句，同时使用了whatever领导的宾语从句第二段最后一句totally absorbed in my own study，I seldom take notice of their tiredness and never offer to do something to make them feel comfortable．使用了非谓语动词作伴随状语．在短语使用上，使用了be tired from因..感到疲惫，remind of想到…be absorbed in沉溺于…take notice of注意到，at least至少，等短语．在词语使用上也十分有亮点，如最后一段最后一句使用了Meanwhile，同时．本文写作十分有层次感，句式运用也十分好．

解答 Respecting the elders is a good virtue．As is shown in the picture，a granddaughter might have realized that her grandma is tired from doing housework，so she thinks that she should do something about it．（高分句型）So she gives her grandmother a gentle back massage，hoping that it can reduce her grandma's tiredness．
（高分句型）This reminds me of my parents and grandparents who have been doing whatever they can do to let me have the best education．（高分句型）But，totally absorbed in my own study，I seldom take notice of their tiredness and never offer to do something to make them feel comfortable．
Now I know I can do my bit to help them with everyday cleaning，or at least clean my own bedroom，or massage their feet or legs before bedtime to help them reduce the tiredness．（高分句型）Meanwhile，I will work harder at my lessons．I know my progress is the best reward for their love．

点评 漫画写作总结：看图写作时注意先要描述漫画内容，注意文章层次感．