Question

 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

   增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

   删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。

   修改：在错的词下划一横线（___），并在该词下面写出修改的词。

   注意:1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Nowadays in our country, some businessman care little about food safety and people’s health so

longer as they can make money. Some even sell polluting or poisonous food to consumers and this

often causes to serious health problems. In order to prevent such tragedy happen again, we students

should try to avoid buy food from the stalls around our school or have meals in the school dinning

hall. Only in this way can we protect themselves. Beside, the local government and the school are

supposed to take practical measures ensure the students’ health and safety.              

Answer 1

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health so longer as they can make money. Some even sell polluting or poisonous food to

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consumers and this often causes to serious health problems. In order to prevent such tragedy

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happen again, we students should try to avoid buy food from the stalls around our school or have

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meals in the school dinning hall. Only in this way can we protect themselves. Beside, the local

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government and the school are supposed to take practical measures ensure the students’ health

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and safety.