Question

12．请你以"Son，Back to School!"为题，用英语写一篇100-120个词的短文，描述漫画内容，并结合生活实际，就漫画的主题发表感想．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇看图作文．写作时，首先要提炼要点，包括：图片展示的内容，孩子沉迷电视的危害，提前建议；其次，要注意以第一人称的口吻，如实的描写现状；最后要注意时态以一般现在时态为佳．
重点短语和句型：
without emotion 无动于衷
take up 占用
bear in mind 记住
get addicted to 沉迷于
It's just a picture，but every day，in some families，it does happen．
句中does构成对谓语的强调．
It's obvious that watching TV too long is harmful to us students because it really takes up a lot of time and disturbs our regular schedule．
句中it作形式主语，真正的主语是后面的that从句；because连接原因状语从句．
we must bear in mind that we should be responsible for ourselves and never get addicted to anything that does harm to us physically and mentally．
句中第一个that连接宾语从句；第二个that引导定语从句．

解答 In the picture，we can see the parents are toughly pulling their little kid out of the TV，and the kid is just like a fool without emotion．It's just a picture，but every day，in some families，it does happen．（高分句型一）【描述图片内容】
    It's obvious that watching TV too long is harmful to us students because it really takes up a lot of time and disturbs our regular schedule．（高分句型二） Secondly，the happiness is temporary but the cost is the permanent damage to our health and morality．What's more，we will have no chance to develop our social skills and friendship with others if we seldom go out to experience the rich and lively world．【说明沉迷电视的危害】
    In brief，we must bear in mind that we should be responsible for ourselves and never get addicted to anything that does harm to us physically and mentally．（高分句型三）【提出建议】

点评 书面表达题考查的是英语的应用能力．写作时要注意：要点的提炼要全；关键短语和句型要写对；过渡词和过渡短语要自然，通顺地道；最后还要注意人称和时态使用要正确．