Question

【题目】假定你是某中学高三学生李华，听说某中外合作办学大学招收广东高中毕业生，有意申请到该校英语系学习。请根据信息，用英语写一封自荐信。要点如下：

主要说明个人教育背景、兴趣爱好和专长、选择课程及理由

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；、

3.开头、结语已为你写好。

Dear Sir/Madame,

I’m Lihua,a senior student who will graduate from Guangdong province this June.

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Yours sincerely

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Sir/Madame,

I’m Lihua,a senior 3 student who will graduate from Guangdong province this june. I am writing this letter in purpose of applying for admission into the English Department in your esteemed university and I’m confident I will meet your both academic and language requirements.

During the past three years in senior school,I have not only grasped the principal skills of all subjects but more importantly developed a strong interest in language and English culture. My ability to write and speak English is out of question so that there will be little problem in attending the courses given by foreign teachers. Besides, your university in “cross-cultural education ”, especially the global community of international students as well as the academic staff from different countries, are of particular interest to me. That's why I seek entry to your university.

I will appreciate it very much if my application can be taken into consideration and look forward to your reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】文章要求根据李华听说某中外合作办学大学招收广东高中毕业生，有意申请到该校英语系学习写一封自荐信。文章属于自荐信要用一般现在时和第一人称来写，还需要注意其正确格式，先说明个人教育背景，然后说明自己的兴趣爱好和专长，再写选择课程及理由，最后写希望获准尽快回复。

写作时要注意有层次的表达，同时运用自己有把握的高级结构或词汇，提升文章档次。如运用宾语从句I will meet your both academic and language requirements. 表语从句why I seek entry to your university.和 I will appreciate it very much if…句型。in purpose, out of question, take into consideration ，look forward to等词汇和not only…but, Besides等连接词。