Question

16．假如你是某英语报纸 English Corner 栏目的编辑李华，现在有一名叫王明的学生来信向你请教如何学好英语．请你就此给他回信，并提出几条建议．信的内容主要包括：
每天早上朗读英语单词、句子及短文；尽量多记一些有用的句子并背诵一些短文章．
经常进行大量的课外阅读．
每天应安排一些时间进行听力练习．
只要你能充分利用你的业余时间来学习英语，你的英语就会很快得到提高．
注意：1．内容应包括以上要点，可以适当发挥，增加细节，以使文章连贯．
2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
3．词数：120左右．
Dear Wang Ming，
I'm an editor of English Corner．I've received your letter asking me to give you some advice on how to learn English well．Dear Li Ming，
I am an editor of English Corner，I've received your letter asking me to give you some advice on how to learn English well．Here are some of my suggestions：（高分句型）
First of all，I suggest you read the English words，sentences and short articles aloud every morning．Meanwhile，you should try to memorize the useful sentences as many as possible and recite some short passages as well．（高分句型）Moreover，it is suggested that you read a great variety of books after school．Last but not least，a certain amount of time should be spent on listening exercises．（高分句型）
As long as you can make good use of your spare time to learn English，surely，you will make rapid progress．（高分句型）Just as the saying goes，"Where there is a will，there is a way．"If you stick to your dream and study hard，I'm sure you will be successful in your English study．（高分句型）
All the best!
Yours，
Li Hua
All the best!
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 一、根据提示，本文包括以下几个要点：1．每天朗读单词、句子及短语，多记句子并背诵短文章．2．经常进行大量课外阅读．3．每天安排时间进行听力练习．4．充分利用业余时间学英语，你的英语将很快得到提高．
二、根据要点，使用恰当的句式把要点扩充成正确的句子．在组词成句时要注意动词的时态、名词的单复数、主谓一致、人称一致、单词拼写等．同时，为增加文章句子的多样性，可适当使用一些复杂句．然后使用学过的连接词和写作技巧使句子连贯成文章．
1．每天朗读单词、句子及短语，多记句子并背诵短文章． I suggest you read the English words，sentences and short articles aloud every morning．You should try to memorize useful sentences as many as possible and recite some short passages as well．
2．经常进行大量课外阅读．You should read a great variety of books after school．
3．每天安排时间进行听力练习．A certain amount of time should be spent on listening exercises．
4．充分利用业余时间学英语．Make good use of your spare time to learn English．Your will make rapid progress．

解答 Dear Li Ming，
    I am an editor of English Corner，I've received your letter asking me to give you some advice on how to learn English well．Here are some of my suggestions：（高分句型）   
     First of all，I suggest you read the English words，sentences and short articles aloud every morning．Meanwhile，you should try to memorize the useful sentences as many as possible and recite some short passages as well．（高分句型）Moreover，it is suggested that you read a great variety of books after school．Last but not least，a certain amount of time should be spent on listening exercises．（高分句型）
    As long as you can make good use of your spare time to learn English，surely，you will make rapid progress．（高分句型）Just as the saying goes，"Where there is a will，there is a way．"If you stick to your dream and study hard，I'm sure you will be successful in your English study．（高分句型）
    All the best!
Yours，
Li Hua

点评 应该注意适当增加细节以使行文连贯，比如适当选用表示因果、递进、转折关系的连接词，使文章流畅、通顺，并避免因反复使用句式相同的简单句而造成的单调感．（1）认真审题，确定体裁． （2）构思要点．根据题目要求，理解要表达的要点．设计好文章的层次段落，考虑所用时态、人称等，把要点串联起来，构成文章框架．（3）选词造句，避难选易．（4）认真检查，避免错误．仔细阅读全文，查找是否有错，注意时态、单词拼写、字母大小写、标点是否有误，句式是否正确．逻辑是否一致