Question

4．请根据以下提示，并结合事例，用英语写一篇短文．
You may talk a lot in life，but you must learn to listen．
注意：
①无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语；
②除诗歌外，文体不限；
③文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；
④词数为120左右．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇开放式作文，写作时不仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文．需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合给出的开头，不能出现文章脱节问题．
亮点句型一：I still remember that once my best friend made a promise that she would come to my birthday party．我还记得有一次，我最好的朋友向我保证她会来参加我的生日聚会．本句是一个复合句，其中that once my best friend made a promise 是宾语从句做remember的宾语；that she would come to my birthday party是一个同位语从句，做promise的同位语．
亮点句型二：It was not until then that I realized the importance of listening．直到那时我才意识到倾听的重要性．本句是一个强调句，被强调部分是时间not untill then，

解答 Have you ever noticed that we have only one mouth but two ears？Some people say that is because the God hopes that we can learn to listen to others more．I still remember that once my best friend made a promise that she would come to my birthday party．（亮点句型一）To my great disappointment，she didn't show up．She later tried to explain what had happened to her，but I refused to listen．There came some misunderstanding between her and me．I thought she didn't value our friendship at all and just found excuse for her absence．But later，another friend told me that on her way to my party，she met an old man who lost the way home．She had great difficulty in helping the old man getting back home，so she missed my party．Now I felt it a pity that I hadn't listened to her with my heart．It was not until then that I realized the importance of listening．（亮点句型二）
      My experience tells me that it is important to learn to listen．It is listening that can remove much misunderstanding．

点评 考查开放性作文写作，开放性作文给出了一个话题，并有部分的文字提示．给考生自由发挥的余地较大．对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力．在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭．同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，在发表个人观点的时候，可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性．