Question

 

假设你是李华，于2010年6月3日搭乘国外某航空公司航班（flight number BA793）回国后，发现遗失了一个行李箱（suitcase）。现请用英文给该航空公司写一封信，请他们帮你寻找。

信件要点包括：

● 陈述写信原因

● 简要描述该行李

● 说明其重要性

● 期待回复并表示感谢

注意：

1.词数100左右。

2.信件格式已为你给出。

3.请在答题卡上作答。

 

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

【思路点拨】试题为应用文中的书信写作，试题只给出写作框架，并未给出所有的具体写作细节，为半开放性写作。写好此文，需注意三点：一是写信格式要准确，信的开头已经给出，但切要写好信的结尾。二是要详略得当，本文应重点写的是对箱子的描述。三要注意适当地增加细节，恰当地使用连接过渡词，以使行文连贯。

【参考范文】

Dear Sir/Madam,

I’m Li Hua. I took the flight BA793 on June 3, 2010. But when I came to my home, I found I lost a suicase. I am writing to you to request you to help me find it back.

My suitcase is a small blue one with a zip. There is a lable on the handle with my name and address on it. It si really important for me, because I had put all my important documents in it, including my ID card, passport and so on. Besides, it si what my father sent to me on my birthday.

Thanks for your kind consideration and I look forward to receiving your earliest reply.

                                                          Yours truly,

                                                            Li Hua.

【范文点评】文章要点齐全，写作层次清晰，紧扣要点框架并适当添加细节，行文连贯，句式多变，能够正确运用各种复合句，对箱子的描述恰当得体。