Question

【题目】假定你是李华，请用英文写一封申请，申请作为“志愿家庭”接待来你校交换学习的英国中学生Johnson，内容包括：

1.自我介绍；

2.家庭条件及个人优势；

3.安排英国朋友参加的活动。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.参考词汇：host family（接待家庭）

Dear Sir or Madam,

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Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,

I sincerely hope that my family can have the honor to be a host family.

My parents are caring and friendly.Our home is next to the city center where easy shopping access and convenient transportation are available.We can offer one separate room for the student.My good command of English makes me free to communicate with foreigners in daily life.So I am convinced I will be a qualified host.If given the chance,I'll invite our guest to join in my family get-together.Besides,we can show him around the city, getting him to know more about the real life and culture in China.

In a word,I'm eager to provide an impressive trip for the foreign friend.Hopefully,you take my application into consideration.Thank you in advance.

Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

【解析】这是一篇提纲类作文。主题：申请作为“志愿家庭”接待来校交换学习的英国中学生Johnson。 文章内容要点已经给出：a.自我介绍；b.家庭条件及个人优势；c.安排英国朋友参加的活动。考生在写这篇文章时，要注意以下几点：

1.文章内容提示已经告知我们写作背景介绍和安排，通篇以一般将来时与现在时态为主；

2. 要点要齐全。但是不要对要点进行简单的罗列。可以使用适当的连接词，使上下文行文流畅，衔接自然流程；

3.. 注意语气。既然该文是以申请作为志愿家庭为主题，所以要注意语气应该比较恳切。要注意书信的格式问题，言辞要诚恳。

【范文亮点】

文章以“I sincerely hope that my family can have the honor to be a host family”开头，开门见山，点出本文写作主题；使用“If given the chance,I'll invite our guest to join in my family get-together” 条件句

运用“I'm eager to provide an impressive trip for the foreign friend”，be eager to do sth.，再次点出文章写作目的，升华主题。

文章使用“in daily life在日常生活中”，“invite our guest to join 邀请某人做某事”，“Besides”，“show him around the city带领某人参观…”，“In a word总而言之”，“I'm eager to provide 渴望做某事”，“Hopefully”，“in advance提前”，等高频词汇。