Question

13．请写一篇英语短文简要介绍Madame Curie，向学校英语报投稿，要点如下：
1.1867年出生于波兰（ Poland）一个教师家庭．
2．从小爱学习并希望成为科学家，16岁中学毕业，24岁就读巴黎大学，生活俭朴，学习刻苦．
3．一生致力于科学研究，于1903年和1911年两次分别荣获诺贝尔物理奖和诺贝尔化学奖．
注意：1．词数100 左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．

Answer 1

分析 考查提纲类作文写作，该作文给出了部分的文字提示．对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力．在完成作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭．
【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语show interest in 对．．感兴趣；have no chance of 没有机会做某事；be admitted to 被录取；In addition 此外；In addition，Madame Curie held such an attitude towards life that the weak wait for opportunities while the strong create them这个句子运用到such …that 如此．．以致于；Not only did she make great contributions to the world of science but she is regarded as the greatest woman scientist owing to what she did．这个句子中运用not only..but also 引导两个句子第一个句子用部分倒装；
Born into an intellectual family in Poland on Nov.7，1867，Marie Curie，also known as Madame Curie，showed great interest in physics when she was young．（高分句型一）
Because of having no chance of being admitted to a university in Poland as a woman at that time，she went to France for further studies and received a degree in physics．（高分句型二）
Not only did she make great contributions to the world of science but she is regarded as the greatest woman scientist owing to what she did．（高分句型三）

解答 Born into an intellectual family in Poland on Nov.7，1867，Marie Curie，also known as Madame Curie，showed great interest in physics when she was young．（高分句型一）Because of having no chance of being admitted to a university in Poland as a woman at that time，she went to France for further studies and received a degree in physics．（高分句型二）In addition，Madame Curie held such an attitude towards life that the weak wait for opportunities while the strong create them．
      With strong will and great determination，Madame Curie achieved great success in discovering radium，which enabled her to win the Nobel Prize．Not only did she make great contributions to the world of science but she is regarded as the greatest woman scientist owing to what she did．（高分句型三）Madame Curie will always be remembered as a great woman．

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧