Question

【题目】据报道，在我国仍有很多山区的孩子因为家庭贫穷而上不起学。你们班就如何帮助这些孩子上学进行了讨论。假如你是李华，请你把你们的建议写成一封信寄给English Weekly，希望他们能够呼吁更多的人參与这項活动。

内容要点：

1. 收集旧课本和衣服；

2. 呼吁更多人帮助他们；

3. 你的建议，至少一条。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 可追当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Editor,

I’m a senior high school student.

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Editor,

I’m a senior high school student. It’s reported that in China many children in mountainous areas still can’t go to school as a consequence of poverty. Last week, our class held a discussion about how to help them to go to school and lead a happy childhood.

Here are our suggestions. To start with, some old textbooks and clothes can be collected and sent to those children so that they can be reused by them. In addition, it’s also of great significance to appeal to more people and social organizations to help and care for those poor children. As far as I’m concerned, we should save some of our pocket money and give it to those children in need. Above all, we should give them respect, never looking down upon them because they are poor.

We’ll really appreciate it if you can, through the English Weekly, increase public awareness of the poor children’s living conditions and call on more people to help them.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】试题本次作文要求根据在我国仍有很多山区的孩子因为家庭贫穷而上不起学。你们班就如何帮助这些孩子上学进行了讨论。假如你是李华，请你把你们的建议写成一封信寄给Teens的编辑，希望他能够呼吁更多的人参与这项活动。要点包括：1. 收集旧课本和衣服；2. 你的建议, 至少两条；3. 呼吁更多人帮助他们。故既要完成任务，又要兼顾形式的要求。

写作亮点：本篇条理清楚，要点全面，结构连贯。其句式上的变化既使得文章生动而流畅，也体现了作者驾驭句式的能力。例如：it做形式主语It’s reported that in China many children in mountainous areas still have no access to school because of poverty. 非谓语动词never looking down upon them. it’s also very important to appeal to和We would appreciate it if you can句型，have no access to，increase public awareness，call on等词汇及First and foremost, As far as I’m concerned, What’s more, Above all 等连接词。