Question

你的生日快到了，父亲许诺将送你一份生日礼物。下面就是这份特殊礼物的描述。请你以“Father’s Gift for My Birthday”为题，用第一人称讲述这个故事。要点如下：
1．上周五早晨，父亲带我到家乡的一所农村学校；
2．唯一的教室里有21个学生，大多数是男生，教室小而昏暗(dim)；
3．虽然那儿条件很差很穷，但学生学习努力，去年有两个学生考上了大学；
4．你的感想，原来这就是父亲给我的礼物……
注意：1．除要求的内容外，可酌情自由发挥；2．词数：100词左右。

Answer 1

Father’s Gift for My Birthday
My birthday of this year fell on last Friday. My father promised to give me a special gift.
Last Friday morning, Father brought me to a village school in his hometown. The school had just one house with one classroom, which was small with dim light, and all the desks and chairs were made of rough boards. There were only 21 students, most of whom were boys. They were listening to the teacher attentively. The teacher told us, while their study conditions were poor, all the students studied very hard and two from the school even went to university last year.
I was deeply struck by their stories. Not until then did I realize that it was my father’s gift for my birthday!

解析1.本文体裁是记叙文；时态应以一般过去式为主。
2.不要逐条翻译，注意用各项内容间的衔接。
3.“感想”要有度，不要发挥的太多。
4.注意运用些教高级的表达方式，如：fall on；be made of，be deeply struck by及各种从句。