Question

下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ)，并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
When I was in high school, most of my friend had bicycles. I hoped I could also have it. One day I saw a second-hand bicycle, that was only one hundred Yuan. I asked my father the money. But he said he could only give me half of the money. He should find the other half myself. So I went to sell newspapers after the school. My father was pleasing when I showed him the money a month after. He gives me the other fifty. You can imagine what happy I was when I rode to school on my own bicycle.

Answer 1

【小题1】friend → friends
【小题2】it → one
【小题3】that →which
【小题4】加上for
【小题5】he → I
【小题6】去掉the
【小题7】pleasing → pleased
【小题8】after → later
【小题9】gives → gave
【小题10】what →how

解析试题分析：
【小题1】… most of my friend had bicycles. 改为friends. （most of + 可数名词复数 / 不可数名词）
【小题2】I hoped I could also have it. 改为one （it指代同一件东西；one指代同一类事物）
【小题3】…, that was only one hundred Yuan. 改为which （that不引导非限制性定语从句）
【小题4】I asked my father ∧ the money. 加上for （向某人索要某物：ask sb. for .sth.）
【小题5】He should find the other half myself. 改为I （父亲说给我一半买车的钱，另一半必须“我”自己想办法）
【小题6】So I went to sell newspapers after the school. 去掉the （after school, 固定用法，意为“放学后”）
【小题7】My father was pleasing when… 改为pleased （pleased, 感到高兴；pleasing, 令人高兴）
【小题8】…when I showed him the money a month after. 改为later （later, 副词，意为“后来”； after, 介词或连词，后接名词或句子）
【小题9】He gives me the other fifty. 改为gave （时态错误。父亲“给”钱发生于过去）
【小题10】You can imagine what happy I was… 改为how （what是代词，后接名词；how是副词，后接形容词或副词。happy是形容词，前面应用how）
考点：短文改错