Question

10．假如你是一名高一年级学生．你发现班上有些同学晚上学习到深夜，白天也不安排休息时间，但往往课堂上昏昏欲睡；有些同学饮食习惯不好，不吃早餐．请你写一篇发言稿，在班会上劝同学们合理安排作息时间，注意健康饮食，保证学习好、身体好．
注意：发言稿须包含上述要点，但可适当发挥，使讲话完整通顺．
It's a pleasure for me to have a chance to make a short speech today．                                             
That's all．Thank you for listening!

Answer 1

分析 本文是开放性作文，根据所给提示，请你写一篇发言稿，在班会上劝同学们合理安排作息时间，注意健康饮食，保证学习好、身体好．又属于提纲作文．在写作时以第一人称和第二人称为主，时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主．
（高分句型一）And some classmates seldom have breakfast，which is also a bad habit and will surely do harm to their health．
该句使用了which引导非限制性定语从句，指前面很多同学不吃早餐这句事情；
 高分句型二）it's extremely important for us to have enough sleep and a proper diet．
该句式it's extremely important for us to do…对某人来说做某事及其重要；
（高分句型三）only in this way can we keep fit and study well．
该句only放在句首，加in this way使用 倒装句；
高级词汇：study late into 熬夜； cannot help doing情不自禁；do harm to 对…有害；make use of 充分利用；keep fit 保持健康；

解答 Dear classmates：
     It's a pleasure for me to have a chance to make a short speech today．Recently，I have found that some of our classmates study late into the night and do not spare any time to take a rest during the day either，but they often cannot help falling asleep in class．（高分句型一）And some classmates seldom have breakfast，which is also a bad habit and will surely do harm to their health．
    In my opinion，（高分句型二）it's extremely important for us to have enough sleep and a proper diet．We must learn to make wise use of our time，and （高分句型三）only in this way can we keep fit and study well．I wonder if you agree with me．
    Thank you for listening!

点评 开放性作文给出一定的写作主题，并此为基础进行思维和联想，自由发挥．不仅考查学生在内容、结构安排、语言运用和组织方面的能力，而且对学生的想像力、发散思维、归纳判断能力也有很高的要求．写好这类作文要注意几个步骤：1． 认真审题，找准提示语中的关键词或句，确定中心思想．2． 依据关键句，草拟提纲，梳理文章的脉络3． 准确定位人称、时态．注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．4．最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等．